Because why not? :'D I'll use Rennok this time.=RoboticMasterMind
's Mary Sue test
Character Name (worth 1 point each)
[ ] Is the character named after you
[ ] Does he/she have a name such as Mar, Miz, Mib, Rose, Toxic etc.
[ ] Is the character's name a noun or adjective
[ ] Does the character have more than one first, middle, or last name, without a reason?
[ ] Is the character's name foreign (like the name normally a human would have), even though the character isn't?
[ ] Does the characters name have a meaning?
[ ] They are named after a existing character or person (example: Jesus, Moses, Deadpool, Lilo, Spyro, Spiderman, Buzz Lightyear etc)
Appearance (worth 1 point each)
[ ] Does your character appear to be much younger than she/he really is? [i don't think so....? XD]
[ ] They are very muscular/strong
[ ] Do they have boobs if female (sorry but Irkens don't have boobs)
[ ] If they do have boobs, do they happen to be ridiculously large.
[ ] They are considered beautiful, hot or sexy to everyone
[ ] They think they are hot and sexy
[ ] They have extremely long eyelashes (female)
[X] Do they have any unusual eye color other than red, maroon, purple, green, or brown?
[ ] They are taller than the tallest (instead of 1 point add 3 points. Tallest are called tallest for a reason. Ignore this if your character is a tallest.) [certainly not.... XD Rennok be my midget]
[ ] Does the character get a ridiculous amount of physical description compared to the rest of the characters?
[ ] One eye is a different color than the other.
[ ] They happen to have hair
[ ] If they have hair, it happens to be one bang covering one eye.
[X] They happen to have overly flamboyant antennae (Piercings, dyed, colorful, stripes, spots, zigzags, crazy shapes, floaty things, heartshaped, etc)
[ ] The antennae happens to be shaped like a fishing rod.
[X] They have unnaturally long antennae [they're longer than normal XD but not so long to a point where he can't perk them up]
[ ] He/she happens to not have a PAK
[ ] He/she wears human clothing
[ ] They happen to have a different tongue color other than magenta or maroon.
[ ] They wear a lot of make up
[ ] Happen to have too many crazy colors, like rainbow colored anything.
[ ] They happen to have different colored blood (Unless they're a homestuck troll they shouldn't have multiple blood colors per Irken, it is said they have only one color for their blood.) [his blood color is whatever that person thinks of as canon... to me that would be translucent pink... XD]
[X] They have sharp teeth (sorry Irkens don't have sharp teeth. Mutated and teeth sharpened still counts as sue trait.)
[ ] They have a implant. (looks sorta like Tak's)
[ ] Their implant happens to make them stronger, and able to use it for special abilities efficiently.
[ ] They wear skimpy, and slutty clothing.
Personality (worth 1 point each)
[ ] They are a cannibal
[ ] They are insane
[ / ] They are a rebel [well, he has rebelled, but he's not entirely against the empire]
[ / ] They were based off of you [all of my characters are in one way or another... XD thats how i keep them somewhat personally close. in rennok's case it's my agression]
[ ] He/she happens to be a psychopath
[X] Is sadistic [he later on feels guilty about this, accept when the person in pain is someone he absolutely hates XD]
[X] They are highly intelligent
[ ] Hates the tallest [he thinks the tallest are incapable, he doesn't exactly hate them]
[ ] Is a invader
[ ] Abuses drugs, or smokes without being effected by its effects.
[ ] Is a alcoholic without having any symptoms from being long term.
[X] Is defective (both physically and mentally)
[ ] They have a multiple personality disorder
[ ] They are bipolar
[ ] Is a Mass Murderer [i don't think rat man slaughter counts ]
[ ] Has the personality of a canon character
[ ] Is he/she selfishly manipulative (lies, blackmails, etc. in order to get her/his way)?
[ ] Overly competitive
[ ] Flirty
[ ] Always brings up good morals
[ ] Acts like Gir
[ ] Acts like a animal
Supernatural (Each of these are 3 points)
[ ] Is immortal
[ ] Happens to be either a demon or a angel
[ ] Is a vampire or part vampire
[ / ] Are they a hybrid [ nooot really... he was 'cloned' like any other irken. it was only later on when he gained some genetic defects due to the empire needing test subjects for DNA fusion... (see more info on his extremely old ref/bio)]
[ ] Is possessed by a demon
[ ] Can use magic of some sort
[ ] Do they have any unnatural body parts (wings, tails, etc) if so add 1 point for each extra appendage such as tails, ears, noses, wings, etc.
[ ] Has no weaknesses
[ ] Is a geisha, cowboy, singer, punk, gypsy, or emo, etc.
[ ] Enhanced mystical or scientifically (super speed, super strength, flying, regenerating limbs, jump super long distances) (add 1 point for each power)
[ ] Is loved by everyone
[ ] Can spit acid, or has acidic blood
[ ] Has single handedly defeated hordes of people or creatures at one time
[ ] Cannot die
[ ] They always win (whether it's games, fighting, or races, etc)
Rp (worth 2 point each. Skip this section is you don't rp.)
[ ] Able to dodge any attack, and is never hittable
[ ] Is never hindered or slowed down in any environment
[ ] Cannot feel any physical pain with consequences of bleeding to death or weakening
[ ] Is able to parry and catch everything thrown at them
[ ] Weeps for or cannot stop thinking about their true love
[ ] They most be with someone. (Is dramatic)
[ ] Wants to help someone out to eventually fall in love or hope the person falls for them
[ ] Tries to force another into doing what they want with force, and succeeding
[ ] Is excessively horny
[ ] Does not follow the plot if rp contains one (crack and random rps don't count)
[ ] Is excessively cocky, and taunting without ever showing a change in attitude during life threatening situations
[ ] Is better than everyone else
[ ] Has the ability to take control of another rpers character to get what they want
Character (worth 1 point each)
[ ] Is born naturally
[ ] Lives on Earth without any explanation
[ ] Has been on earth before
[X] Was an experiment of some sort [only once, and for just one thing as mentioned previously. until his later years right before death.]
[ ] Has been raped
[ ] Is a rapist
[ ] Lost a lover or loved one.
[ / ] Wants revenge [ the reason he had created aber, thus he had already achieved it? XD at least in his mind]
[ ] Was abused.
[ ] Is the character related to royalty or nobility?
[ ] Is the long lost brother/sister of a canon character?
[ ] Is related to a canon character?
[ ] Is in love with a canon character?
[ ] The canon character loves them back.
[ ] They were assigned to Earth
[ ] Do they want revenge on Zim
[ ] They are loved by the Tallests.
[ ] They were able to kill multiple people as a smeet/child
[ ] They are never caught
[ ] Is of high rank in the empire without height counting
[ ] Uses a weapon from earth (handgun, medieval swords, scythes etc.)
[ ] Has a tragic past [i wouldn't really consider it tragic. it's his future that's more 'tragic' XD]
[ ] The character is the last surviving member of their family.
[ ] Was the character ever forcibly banished from the Empire?
[ ] Was the character abandoned by her/his caregivers?
[ ] Did the character run away from home or break out of a experimental facility? [technically he was fired... XD]
[ ] Does the character consider her/his beauty/talent/skill/etc. a curse?
[ ] Does the character have a SIR resembling GIR (looks even remotely like him)
[ ] Does the character ever easily learn a difficult skill (e.g. learn to be a amazing pilot in a matter of weeks)? [He spends about a good several years trying to study Nuclear Chemicals as a self-declared nuclear chemist, but even then he still didn't learn as much as normal, due to being hard-wired for genetics and not having access to anything long enough to download any data. one of few reasons he's a mental defect - his 'passion' is not what his PAK was created/hard-wired for it to be]
[ ] Does the character have an amazing singing voice?
[ ] Does the character "just know things"?
[ / ] Is the character repeatedly rivaled by the same person? [..... xD Rennok hates azucar.... but azucar always comes back to rennok's warehouse to annoy him.. it's not really a competitive rivalry... more like a hateful relationship xD][Azucar (c) ~Yoru-chan49]
[ ] Does the character suffer punishment for a crime she/he did not commit?
[ ] They are of high class
[ ] They always get their way
[ ] Work jobs normally humans would work (like a teacher, president, etc. If seen in the show like janitor or fast food restaurants, ignore this.)
[ ] Their favorite food is cookies, cupcakes, and tacos. (only these specific food items, since Irkens are snack and fast food junkies) [Fun Fact: Rennok LOVES little snacks like Peeps (for those of you who don't know, basically sugar coated marshmallow) BUT... Rennok can't handle much sugar well... if he has too much sugar he'll get hyper and weird.]
[ ] They eat normal non-processed meat or animals (sorry Irkens only eat heavily processed greasy meat, sandwiches, fastfood, and junk food.)
[ ] Can run on all fours (sorry, bi-pedal beings bodies aren't built to run on all fours with their shorter arms and longer legs. Unless they end up with a damaged spine eventually.)
De-Suifier (subtract 1 point)
[X] Do you ever poke fun at your character's faults/weaknesses and/or use them as part of the plot?
[ ] Is Over weight (chunky, or even chubby)
[ ] Is plain looking.
[X] Physical defect that hinders a weakness(other than being self-conscious about them, only that his antennae are slightly more sensitive due to the DNA fusion [since Chiens have more heightened senses than Irkens]
[ ] Has actual scars, from a fight, or from past experiences.
[X] Has bad habits [most commonly is being highly defensive, even if unnecessary]
[ ] Is a smeet or child
[ ] They are physically disabled/weak
[ ] Can't fight at all
[X] Has a phobia [He has pretty bad claustrophobic and acrophobia, sometimes he has gotten to points where he's almost lost consciousness]
[ ] They always fail
[X] They are single
[ / ] Are homeless [technically? XD he declared an abandoned warehouse on a less populated side of one of Irk's cities his own XD]
[ ] Does your character suffer post-traumatic stress disorder as a result of everything they have gone or go through?
[X] Has your character ever misjudged someone else?
[ ] Is clumsy, or unlucky
[ ] Is unintelligent (dumb, stupid, or idiotic)
[ ] They appear older than they actually are
[X] They happen to smell strange, or bad. [he probably smells like the dusty old warehouse with a combination of the chemicals he's almost always around XD]
De-Suifier (subtract 2 points)
[ ] Is absolutely hideous
[ ] Is very obese
[ ] Is middle to old aged
[X] Does your character act in odd and/or awkward ways that other people find strange and confusing? (weird, and just someone no one wants to be around.) [i would think so, he doesn't really like being around people and so doesn't have the right social skills XD]
[ / ] Has a bad personality (such as being mean,etc) [when it come's down to it, he's actually pretty caring especially if he knows/trusts the person. but a lot of the time he'll just act like a jerk. that whole high defense thing again]
[ ] Is mentally retarded
[ ] looks like a normal Irken (no strange antennae, none of that just typically normal)
FINAL SCORE: 1
...... wow xD exactly 1. well, at least he's normal :'D
-26 to -4 (Anti-Sue)
They have too many flaws, and most likely has little to no personality. They could use some tweaking.
-3 to 10 (Normal Character)
You have a well balanced interesting character of good and bad.
11 to 15 (Border Sue)
Your character is on the verge of being a Mary sue, and is most likely annoying to some. However they can be toned down and fixed.
16 to 150 (Mary Sue)
Your character is a Mary sue, hands down. It's best for you to redesign them completely.</i>Rennok bouncy, Eclair-in-a-bottle (c) =ProjectHalfbreed
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