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Yep. some Warrior Cats fanart 
Shallow Bay is a song i feel fits very well with both CrimsonStar and Scourge
CrimsonStar never meets Scourge nor do they exist in the same time frame
... but i just wanted to draw them together XD
Shallow Bay (c) Breaking Benjamin [link]
Scourge/Warrior Cats (c) Erin Hunter
CrimsonStar/art (c) me.
Shallow Bay is a song i feel fits very well with both CrimsonStar and Scourge
CrimsonStar never meets Scourge nor do they exist in the same time frame
... but i just wanted to draw them together XDShallow Bay (c) Breaking Benjamin [link]
Scourge/Warrior Cats (c) Erin Hunter
CrimsonStar/art (c) me.
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Originality Technique ImpactFirst of all, I love that sparkly texture. Its so sparkly. ;u;
Ahem, anywho; overall it think this is a really nice piece and being a warrior cats fan myself I really like it.
However some of the anatomy on Scourge just seems a bit 'wonky' to me. And by that I mean the backbone/spine/tail is somewhat out of proportion (Though I am taking into account this is a more 'cartoony' style for cats). It is a really dynamic pose and the scaling is good, but the back could be just a little higher up. And frankly, the tail just looks a bit reptilian. I think it would have looked better if it were a but fluffier and got thinner closer to the base of the tail rather and gradually get bigger like it is in your picture.
I like the background too, but it would be nice to have more shadow around where the cats are standing and unless its supposed to be a really sparse field; more grass and more variation in the grass.
But enough of the negatives. As I said earlier, Scourge is in a fairly difficult pose to draw, but it still looks really cool how he is jumping out at the screen. The paws/claws look great as well.
The second character (Crimsonstar) has a really nice design. I like how the eye with the scar is paler than the other. The eyes in general are very nice .
So wheee. I don't know if this will help or not, I don't do that many critiques. I hope I didn't go on too long either.